Thursday, May 8, 2008

Joint Effort

This poem is written by me and my friend Neha. We just kept on collecting our thoughts and this poem was created. as this is her 1st effort and so, please give some special appreciation to her, if possible.
So, here it goes.

Life is a long journey, with roads untrodden,
where each one is a traveller, looking for a companion,
though he finds many, but none as pure as his soul,
so, he chooses to walk alone, alone to reach his goal,
but then he needs someone to push him towards his goal,
And the eternal search begins, to make his life whole,
And this is where his life begins to change,
suddenly known places, start looking strange,
where his eyes speak and heart cries,
he cannot find the perfect friend, however hard he tries,
His innocent soul doesn't know the practicality of life,
So it keeps on wandering, to find just pain and grief,
which makes him realise that he is ditched,
but every experience makes him enriched,
and this way he learn to live life, to travel the journey,
to find his way through nights, and even days sunny,
and this makes him sure, there is no end to pain,
there is no longer sun for him, only soggy rain,
and he loves this rain to hide his tears,
how long does he have to survive with this fears?
but then at the horizon, he saw a bright view,
as he went closer, he found that it was you,
all hurt, and bruised and tortured and wet,
he finally found you, the best he could get,
and then he knew, he was no more alone ever,
cuz he had now found, friend forever...

- Neha Shavdia & Priyank

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

well truly speaking a very good poem.. i wld say Neha u r better thn Priyank,, ( nevr mind Priyank)
its really a poem from heart (not to mention like all others)
Let the pen go on a roll !!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Hey! Finally read this poem.. I remember Priyank telling me once that he'd made you write a poem inspite of you being so hesitant...
Amazing work, guys!