Friday, June 13, 2008

Astitva

one of my friends, Sonali got inspired to try her hand into writing something. The result was something very beautiful and excellently written. I'm posting her thoughts over here. I have not even edited or helped her in writing this. This is completely her piece of mind... Plzz comment so that she knows how well she writes...


Han Mein Ek Adhura Khwab Hun, Muje Sajne Do,
Han Mein Zindgi Hun, Muje Jine Do.

Mein Ugte Hue Suraj Ki Wo Kiran Hun
Jo Apni Roshni Se Sare Jahan Ko Roshan Kar Sakti he,
Mein Chupte
Hue Taro Ki Wo Dastan Hun
Jo Har Rat Ke Bad Savera Kar Sakti He.

Mein Pani Ki Bund Hun
Jo Kisika Astitva Bana Sakti Hai,
Aur Shayad Pani Ki Wo Laher
Jo Kisi Ka Astitva Bhi Mita Sakti Hai.

Chahe Meri In Ankho Ki Nami ho
Ya Mere Chehre Ki Masumiyat,
Chahe Mere Buland Irade Ho
Ya Asma Ko Chune Ki Meri Chahat
Yahin Mera Vajud He Aur Yahin Meri Pehchan.

Shayad Isi Liye Ab Bhi Mein Ek Adhura Khwab Hun
Muje Sajne Do
Han Mein Hi To Hun Zindgi
Muje Jine Do.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I dont believe this is her first time...why doesnt she start her own blog??i am saying this coz i also tried my hand at poetry but my first 1 was nowhere near this, so keep writing is all i can say...

Mickey said...

wo wo !!
thts juss amazingggggg..

each and very word is so beautifully sown in the poem.lovveddddd it..
chittu is right..
u shld start ur own blog sonali..

this is simply beautiful .. specially fr a person writing fr th frst time :)
keep it going :)

HD said...

Nice one!

I still recollect how i got inspired by Priyank and took up writing seriously...I still can't believe I have written about a dozen poems and have now shifted to writing short stories. And surprisingly I seem to have improved a lot.